FROM: Mr. ROBINSON
TO:BILL B.
SENT: 2 APRIL 2008 19:20
SUBJECT: REQUEST FOR MONDAY TASK
DEAR: Mr. ROBINSON
Do not worry, I can charge of date of the next meeting. I send the date of the meeting, before Sunday.
The new assistant is efficient, I can not complain, arrives early, has everything in order and do not need to be told you have to do it, before she does.
At the moment I do not want to give increases to any of my group, thanks, but when called upon to do so I know I will. At the moment is everything, and if I have any doubt I will get it by mail.
yours sincerely
Bill B.
manager of human resources
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I can charge of date of the next meeting. I send the date
What do you mean by "I can charge"?
I will send you the date...
The new assistant is efficient, I can not complain
These are two complete thoughts, which cannot be linked by a comma. Use either a semi-colon or a period.
arrives early, has everything in order and do - She arrives...does
Bill B.
Your email is addressed to Bill. You should sign it John.
"Yours sincerely" is too formal for an email.
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